Analysis of The Journey
Adjekawen A. Jeremiah 1998 (Delta State, Nigeria)
A sojourner on a journey,
Waddling through a tunnel on a pony.
The only lamp I've got are my dreams,
Forth I stretch to brighten my glimpse.
Toughened by the hurdles I'm put through,
At the end, I hope I shall pull through.
Passioned by my guts in the race of life,
At the end, I hope I shall see light.
Three companions to my left,
After whose route I have lept.
What a journey so blessed! I had felt.
But while I yet bend my back to all,
Nodding yes at beck and call,
The flame to my lamp was gone.
Now I must learn to grope!
My nearest folks have pawned me like a sheep,
While we ate from the same bowl of friendship.
How will aluta continua,
When Victoria is yet at Sparta?
Like a water hyacinth,
Floating on a pool of innocence.
Like a memory, extinct,
Nursed from a drop of a depressant.
Like an indistinct hum,
Bemoarning the plight of a poor fate,
So have I become,
Like an image on a colourless portrait.
In this journey:
I have learnt both the good and bad,
I can tell good the goose from the bat.
The sycophant who lick thy feet at thy sight,
And curse thy name off thy eyes.
The companion who lures thy guts to thy battle,
And flee thy back like a beetle.
In this journey:
I have learnt to laugh,
With my heart split in half.
I have learnt to smile,
With a little tear in my eyes.
Here comes the gods of oratory and two truths,
Tiptoeing in the old cloak of Brutus,
Dripping, their lips, with lies,
Soothing my wounds with hot spice.
If I must be well in this journey,
I must dig a well in my belly.
If I must survive in this tunnel
I must secret my thoughts in deep channels.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01001010 11010101 010111111 11111011 101010111 101111111 111100111 101111111 1010111 1011111 101011111 111111111 1011101 0111111 111111 1101111101 1111011110 1111 1010011110 101010 101011100 1010001 110110010 110011 1011011 11101 111010110 0110 11110101 111101101 011111111 0111111 001011111110 01111010 0110 11111 111101 11111 10101011 11011100011 100011110 101111 1011111 111110110 111010110 111010110 1110110110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,599 |
Words | 368 |
Sentences | 22 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 7, 4, 8, 7, 5, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 47 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 136 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
The poem, "The Journey", acquaints the reader with the plight of the poet persona: his ordeal amidst his supposed friends/allies. The poem centers on friendship and deceit; loyalty and betrayal; naïveness and self-realization.
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Written on February 15, 2022
Submitted by jerrylov322 on March 24, 2022
Modified by jerrylov322 on March 27, 2022
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