Analysis of You take my breath way



J'Lynn takes my breath away
She stole my heart the second I realized she must be the one for me
She has to be the one for me
I have waited for so long for her to come into my life and here she is
The most beautiful person ever existed
Her hair is beautiful
Her smile lights up my life
Her eyes shimmer
I get lost in her eyes
Her laugh makes me laugh


Scheme ABBCDEFGHI
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 1111101 11110101101110111 11110111 1110111101101110111 011001010010 011100 011111 0110 111001 01111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 350
Words 76
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 274
Words per stanza (avg) 75

About this poem

I wrote this for the love of my life, J'Lynn Baca.

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Written on April 21, 2022

Submitted by mbrown10 on March 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mary Beth Brown

I may have "fell in love" with many people, but J'Lynn takes my breath away. She is the most beautiful person ever existed. I love her with all my life. more…

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