You take my breath way



J'Lynn takes my breath away
She stole my heart the second I realized she must be the one for me
She has to be the one for me
I have waited for so long for her to come into my life and here she is
The most beautiful person ever existed
Her hair is beautiful
Her smile lights up my life
Her eyes shimmer
I get lost in her eyes
Her laugh makes me laugh

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I wrote this for the love of my life, J'Lynn Baca.

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Written on April 21, 2022

Submitted by mbrown10 on March 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABBCDEFGHI
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 350
Words 76
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10

Mary Beth Brown

I may have "fell in love" with many people, but J'Lynn takes my breath away. She is the most beautiful person ever existed. I love her with all my life. more…

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