Analysis of Hidden tryst between heaven and earth



A ballet of ebony over soft soil  
whips fresh air in the forest of old
by the cool lake, under the white moon

Ballads of promise lie
between thin breaths.
Lovers move in tandem
coming together as one
by the cool lake, under the white moon

Crystal waters cleanse
their feet caked with clay
by the cool lake, under the white moon
Indulge! Indulge! Indulge!
By the cool lake, under the white moon


Scheme xxA xxxxA xxAxA
Poetic Form
Metre 00111001011 111001011 101110011 101101 0111 101010 1001011 101110011 10101 11111 101110011 010101 101110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 402
Words 81
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 5
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Written on May 12, 2022

Submitted by DoYouSeeItToo on March 21, 2022

Modified by DoYouSeeItToo on May 12, 2022

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