Analysis of Hideaway

M.R.P 2000 (Bushbuckridge)



I hide behind a pen and a paper
With a broken pencil I draw my heart's feelings
I hide, but I can see myself
I try to run, but my feet are wet in love
Every step is a trail print
This feeling follows preying me

Goose bumps on my heart's beats
Shaky like it's sick, so frail
Seeking to be blown by the air
Blindly led by love's dusty hand
But stuck on to the branches of my mind
So rigid, like a mountain it is mount
The leaves susurrate these thoughts
As they rustle, my heart ruminates
In this wrestle, do I show I'm desperate
Do I, or hold on to the unspoken truth

I hear my heart's love beats
To that loud sound I think
Do we die while we try, or
Do we try not to die
Do we stay or fly away
Claim, we let love have her way


Scheme XAXXXX BXXXXXXAXX BXXXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010010 101010111110 1111111 11111111101 10011011 11010101 111111 1011111 10111101 10111101 1111010111 1101010111 01111 1110111 0110111110 11111100101 111111 111111 1111111 111111 1111101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 735
Words 158
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 10, 6
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 186
Words per stanza (avg) 51

About this poem

Confess the feeling assumed to be love or hold it in

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Written on November 09, 2018

Submitted by proxj707 on March 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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