Analysis of Dreams are often Peculiar!

Murry Priyanshu Rao 2009 (Rayagada, Odisha)



My bed became a spacecraft,
Yes! Its really true.
Suddenly I woke up
My bedroom disappeared from the view.

Then soon my eyes were bulging
Looking furiously all around,
After sometime I realised
I was not on the ground!

After sometime I saw
 A very bright light,
It was nothing but the brightness of
The earth’s own satellite!

Then I saw my friends
Waiting for me on the moon,
Arranging the dining table
With plates,forks,knives and spoons.

When I landed on the moon
I was overwhelmed with joy,
Playing,laughing,rolling spinning
Which made my friends quiet annoy

One of my friends was making
Tasty tomato soup in a pan
And my best friend was serving
Cupcakes and flans!

When we were about to dine
A noise we have heard,
There was a tall alien standing behind
With long moustache and beard.

When I was at the verge
 Of finishing my dream,
I heard a loud noise
Of my mother’s scream.

After that I woke up
Due to my mother’s call,
I was at the edge of my bed
About to fall.

After that I said “Why you woke me up mom”
“Weather is so cool”
Then my mother said to me
“Won’t you go to school ?”


Scheme ABCB DEAE FGXG XHXX HIDI DXDF XXXX XJXJ CKXK XLXL
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 110101 11101 100111 1101101 1111010 101000101 10111 111101 10111 01011 111010101 01110 11111 1011101 01001010 1101 1110101 110111 110 11111001 1111110 10011001 0111110 101 1100111 01111 11011001001 11101 111101 110011 11011 11101 101111 111101 11101111 0111 10111111111 10111 1110111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,124
Words 244
Sentences 12
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem comprises of my weird dream and my misadventures with fictional characters.

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Submitted by TheIndian on March 04, 2022

Modified on April 28, 2023

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