Analysis of Only Survivor



I was a little girl waiting to hug my angel,
you
deprived me of the light, air and love,
carving my lungs, nose and heart,
couldn’t enjoy the life because
I wasn’t wanted.
I didn’t survive the evil you nested and nurtured in your heart.
***
I was a toddler fleeing the oppressor with my parents,
Trudged to unknown through cold, dark night
on narrow paths in the woods,
seeking refuge in darkness, hoped to reach the light,
on the other side
but
the darkness and cold water devoured me.
I didn’t survive the wrath of your ego that you can’t let go.
***
I was a dedicated teacher
embodied the altruism, chastity and compassion,
determined to fight ignorance and hate,
wanted to offer my arms to all,
but
ignorance, hatred and fear tortured and killed me.
I didn’t survive the bigotry and jealousy
that captured your mind.
***
I was an expecting mother, waiting to and kiss my new born,
couldn’t even smell my baby because
you handcuffed and sent me to the jail,
leaving my heart in the delivery room.
I didn’t survive your indifference.
***
I was your brother from the same mother,
or your own son or daughter
that you raised with care, pride and honor,
you
ignored me, disowned me, dismissed me.
chose to be with the oppressor because
“he was feeding you”.
I didn’t survive the fear that encompassed your body and soul.
***

I was the trees, ants, deer, turtles and squirrels,
living in peace, away from you
until you torched our home to open up land,
for the free land you promised to your friends and fans
I didn’t survive the gluttony and your lust for unearned wealth.
***
I was the little barefooted girl with unkempt hair,
working for a dollar a day,
worked hard to make your shirt and skirt
couldn’t play with my peers to my heart’s content.
I didn’t survive your conscienceless nature.
***
I was the little daisy,
Born on a cool summer morning,
Bloomed for 40 days
Then, I went back to my Lord, leaving my angels in tears.
Lucky me,
didn’t have to suffer the sorrows.
I survived the misfortunes
that you offer to your
opponents.


Scheme xAxbcxb dexexFgx hxxxFggx xcxxx hhhAgcax xaxxx xxxxh gxxxgxxxd
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011011110 1 011101101 1011101 1010101 1110 1101010110010011 1 110101000101110 11011111 1101001 101001011101 10101 1 01001100101 110101111011111 1 110100010 01001001000010 0101110001 101101111 1 100100110011 110101000100 11011 1 1110101010101111 110111001 11011101 10110001001 110110100 1 1111010110 1111110 111111010 1 011011011 1111001001 11101 110101101011001 1 11011110010 10010111 011110111011 101111011101 110101000111011 1 11010111011 10101001 11111101 1111111110 11011110 1 1101010 11011010 111 11111111011001 101 11110010 1010010 111011 010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,078
Words 412
Sentences 18
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 41, 21
Lines Amount 62
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 788
Words per stanza (avg) 186

About this poem

Never published written in January, 2022 about the victims of the evil present in the world

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Written on 2022

Submitted by SeanLee on February 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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