Analysis of Removing Of Doubt



Not a dream to wish,
Comes true without devoting...
Patience and time done to sacrifice,
Facing obstacles.
And a way to eliminate challenges.
With kept to keep faith,
That one's path to take...
Does not erase the dream.
Because of fear.
A fear that appears in one's mind.
But a dream to want,
With applied effort to endeavor it...
Will eventually come true.
To believe it seen to touch and feel,
One's dream too real.
Forgetting about the time it took,
Sacrificing what it takes...
To make something from nothing,
Real to feel.
And touch a belief,
A removing of doubting made possible.

'Your love to have,
Has to be extremely strong.'

'Oh?
And why do you say that?
Didn't I tell you,
I loved what I did.
And what I did to do,
Will be believed.'

'But, I have to admit,
This love of yours I did not see it!'

'And now you do.
Revealed with evidence and proof of it.
When I love it is strong.
As if to me,
Belongs already accomplished.
Before.
And a long time to have it after!'

'You are definitely committed!'

'Isn't that what having a love is about?'


Scheme XAXXXXXXXXXBCDDXXADXX XE XXCXCX BB CBEXXXX X X
Poetic Form Etheree  (38%)
Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 10111 1101010 10011110 10100 0011010100 11111 11111 110101 0111 01101011 10111 1011010101 10100011 101111101 1111 010010111 100111 1110110 111 01001 00101101100 1111 1110101 1 011111 10111 11111 011111 1101 111101 111111111 0111 0111000111 111111 1111 01010010 01 001111110 111000010 10111001101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,055
Words 242
Sentences 28
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 21, 2, 6, 2, 7, 1, 1
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by lpahtillah on February 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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