Analysis of Not Alive without Loss



You shun being if you block emotion,
and disavow all feel that may be there,
just out of fear that a new devotion
to grace well found around you somewhere
will end in loss, a hurt you couldn’t bear.
Still, of this sea, the waves urge you to meet,
leading the way. Once lifted off your feet
they will drag you along in their deep dive,
sudden raisings, till your shivers can fleet,
and you’ll admit to the forces of life.


Scheme ABABBCCDCE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1110111010 001111111 1111101010 11110111 110101111 1111011111 1001110111 1111010111 101111011 0101101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 425
Words 87
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 326
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Submitted by ludy_b on February 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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