Analysis of My care has no Color



         My care has no Color
When I assist the elder causation lady to get into bed cause her aliening body is no longer able to perform this task alone.
As she thanks me for my care and treatment of her done with respect and the utmost care the tears well up  in her blue eyes and my color turns RED

When I see the Asin child about to fall in the water and I grab him and alert his mother of the imminent danger my color turns Yellow  like the sunshine that appears on her face when her child is safely wrapped in her arms.

When the homeless man sweeps the lot of the store and we all wonder what is he going through in his life.  I give him needed conversation and a blessing on his life  my color is Blue like the man.

Walking along the park and seeing the vibrant flower emerging from the apple tree my color turns White like the purity of the seed that birthed the flower
.
Rolling down the freeway on my way to honor one of our countries war vets for one last time, as the  trees and nature go by they take hold of my spirit and I remember the talks and walks we used to share as I cared for him my color turns Green  like the land he fought for and I am humbled.

The color of a sunset I shared with the brown skinned African child that was suffering is silence from the loss of his parents who were taken by war my color turns Orange like the fire seen in the distance concluding his sorrows for the day.

The colors of care is as vas as the colors of the god made rainbow that we all delight in. Let our care for one another continue to have no color.


Scheme AXX X X A X X A
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 1101010101011011101101110101011101 1111111010101101001101110011011011 11101101110010011100111010100101101101011011011011101001 101011011010111011110101111110010001011111011101 1001010100101001010101110111010010111010 1 101011111101110101111111010101111111100101001011111111111101110111101110 0101011110111001111001101011110101011110110101010010010110101 0101111110101011111101011011101001011110
Characters 1,565
Words 323
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 1, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 122
Words per line (avg) 32
Letters per stanza (avg) 204
Words per stanza (avg) 53

About this poem

This poem was inspired by my personal care clients and encounters I have had in my life with various people along the way.

Font size:
 

Written on December 01, 2021

Submitted by tjkg55 on January 10, 2022

Modified on April 01, 2023

1:36 min read
56

T.Conyer

I am a 58 year old african american woman who has always had a passion to write and give others a voice through me. I work as a pharmacy tech for a well know hospital in Georgia. I have 1 daughter who served our country for 5 years. I am currently working on a poetry manuscript and hoping to get published in the near future. more…

All T.Conyer poems | T.Conyer Books

1 fan

Discuss this T.Conyer poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "My care has no Color" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/119647/my-care-has-no-color>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    T.Conyer

    »

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    6
    hours
    38
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote a famed poem about the Crimean War?
    A Alfred E. Neuman
    B Oscar Wilde
    C Alfred Douglas
    D Alfred Lord Tennyson