Analysis of I AM Black



I can sing with clear voice
My color is only to identify
That I am a beautiful black
Black as ebony

I am proud of my color
Precious as diamond
Sparkling in the sun
As hidden beans in the jungle

When I smile my snow white teeth
Brightening a day
My humbleness as a gesture of respect
Not a sign of weakness

If I call you “Sir” or “Madam”
Nothing wrong
That too out of respect

Looking on tenderly heart
Enlightening the shallow and cloudy way
Knowing in a distance will keep us apart

Getting closer help us to know better
I am also full of wisdom
I am black, I am black


Scheme XXAX BXXX XCDX EXD FCF BEA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1101101010 11101001 11100 1111110 10110 10001 11010010 1111111 10001 111010101 101110 11111110 101 111101 1011001 01000100101 10001011101 1010111110 11101110 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 581
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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I am black, nothing wrong to be black. The expression is based on admiration of blackness.

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Submitted by yeshigemaneh on February 03, 2022

Modified on March 06, 2023

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Yeshiembet/Yeshi Gemaneh

I was born and raised in Eastern parts of Ethiopia in the city of Harar, I was attended elementary and secondary school in Haile Selassie Day School in Addis Ababa. I remember when I was in grade 7, I won a prize for being the best student - a book "Alice in Wonderland," from Emperor Haile Selassie, King of Ethiopia. From High School, I was rewarded scholarship for higher education on City Administration, and Social Studies in the cities of Luneburg, Aachen and Dusseldorf, West Germany. I had also a humble opportunity of learning Western culture, German language and associated closely with hard working German people. My fascination and love for poems goes many years back, when I was in grade 7, one day our English teacher read, "Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star ...," since then I wanted to write poems. In 1995 I had an opportunity to join, The International Library of Poetry. Since then I expressed on variety of topics or titles; I call it my ABC poems. I see my life experience as my greatest teacher, and I love to share what I have had acquired over many years with others, however, every day I am a learner. It is my strong belief and philosophy, if a person has interest and willpower can achieve his goal. As a child, my important figure was my mother. She taught me the Ethiopian alphabets, and love of family and surroundings that helped me to see many things positively. Unfortunately, despite my wonderful childhood experience and growth; I encountered many ups and down of life journey that too taught me a lesson. Now, I am in my senior years being old is wisdom. There is a saying, "quitters are losers," and I don't want that to apply on me. more…

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