Analysis of (Don't Ask Me) What I Need

Sarah Rayan 1982 (Kuwait City)



Ask me anything in the world, and I will always be your girl, but don't ask me what I need, you won't hear what you're looking for

If you don't believe, I might need you to leave, and you might need me to stay, when I'd rather fly away; ask and you'll receive, as long as you believe

You may never see me again, if we stop playing pretend
so don't ask me what I need, or this angel may descend

If you don't believe, I might need you to leave, and you might need me to stay, when I'd rather fly away; but don't ask me what I need, you might help me plant this seed


Scheme X X AA X
Poetic Form
Metre 11100010111111111111111111101 111011111110111111111010110101111101 111011011111001 11111111110101 111011111110111111111010111111111111111
Characters 566
Words 120
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 84
Words per line (avg) 23
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on January 29, 2022

Submitted by on January 29, 2022

Modified by on February 27, 2022

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Sarah Rayan

As a proud Palestinian, I protest for peaceful resolve of the conflicts inherited by my homeland, with nothing mightier than the pen. Until I meet this goal, I swim alone. Readers may find the same metaphor woven into most of my work. more…

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