Analysis of Sky



The sky is raining madness
The sky is a deep shade of cerulean blue-
The sky reflects the shadows cast by mountains of oblivion.

The sky weeps its rain upon me
The sky is darkening and threatening.
The sky inter-meshes with the tears
emanating from my heart that bleeds pain and fear.

The sky, so ominous taunts me.
The sky reflects the silhouettes of my aspirations.
The sky captures my nightmares,
Transforming into a tranquil dream state.

The sky is thundering anger
That rises from the depths of hell’s inferno-
The sky is drowning me inside a river of toxic rain.
But I keep searching for redemption.

The sky emanates voices summoning me-
Voices that only I can hear.
The sky is illuminated by hidden stars.
The sky produces cumulus clouds
Blending with the luminescence of the rising and setting of the sun.

The sky unfolds into the universe.
The sky is forever magical and mysterious
Infinitely changing in intensity and hue.
The sky is constant- its miracles, never abating.
The sky is often stunning but at times, behaves erratically.

The sky could hold the answers to my dreams-
My dreams are illuminated by hidden stars
That shall someday come out from hiding.


Scheme ABC DEFX DXFX XXXC DXGXC XABED XGE
Poetic Form
Metre 0111010 011011111 010101111010100 01111011 0111000100 010110101 10011111101 01110011 010100111010 011011 0100101011 01110010 11010111010 011101010101101 111101010 01100101001 10110111 01101001101 0101011 10100101010010101 010101010 01101010000100 1000100010001 01110110010010 0111010111010100 0111010111 11101001101 11111110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,208
Words 237
Sentences 17
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 4, 5, 5, 3
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on January 22, 2022

Submitted by claudiakrizay on January 24, 2022

Modified on April 19, 2023

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Claudia Krizay

I am a 65 year old woman living with schizophrenia. My poetry is an expression of my inner self and my way of coping with difficult times and enjoying good times through my writing and artwork I have found a place for myself in this world. more…

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