Analysis of ETERNITY



The lemon tree gave off
A crisp and pungent smell.

The people in the orchard
Having played their games
Of chess or cards
Got up and went their ways.

Others drawing-----who knows-----
What regrets
From their cigarettes
Sat for a while
And departed, too.

A few young fellows
Quickly passed through
Going their various ways
To various goals.

But I was only watching
The dust on my shoes
And thinking-----for long.

The lemon tree
Was giving off
A crisp and pungent smell.


Scheme aB xxxc deexf dfcx xxx xaB
Poetic Form
Metre 010111 010101 0100010 10111 1111 110111 101011 101 1101 1101 00101 01110 1011 1011001 11001 1111010 01111 01011 0101 1101 010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 472
Words 92
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 5, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Written on January 22, 2022

Submitted by vckarr17 on January 22, 2022

Modified on March 28, 2023

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