Analysis of Endless dreamer
Pin Lim 1982 (Montreal)
We belong in two different worlds you & me
For you to take notice of me among the sea of followers
I’m trying to stand out by staying true to myself make you a believer
Can’t hide these feelings… let my heart become the dreamer
Staring outside my window into the endless stars past midnight
Often asking myself to keep up this fight until maybe someday...
Can’t run and hide these feelings anymore… it’s being put on display
In time you’ll maybe notice me and hopefully, look my way.
All I can do is pray for you to find your happiness and although it’s selfish...
Part of me wants to have you to myself to love and to cherish
To have you all to myself in our special little place
Holding onto you like you’re the only person in this time & space
You came into my life like a blazing heatwave that lit me up and caught me on fire
Still dazed and light-headed my only cure is to love you the one that I desire
I think it’s obvious by now that I am crazy for you my dear
So time will tell what’s in store for this dreamer his intention is crystal clear.
Know that you are the one thing that makes up the best part of my day
From your small frame to all your amazing curves that look like a buffet
Let me be the one to go on this journey in life with you my dear
Just say the words and I’ll come running through hell towards you I swear.
Scheme | XXAA XBBB CCDD AAEE BXEX |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (40%) |
Metre | 10101100111 1111101101011100 110111110111110010 1111011101010 101111001010111 101011111101101 1101110011101101 011101010100111 1111111111110001110 111111111110110 11111101010101 1010111010100111 110111101011111011110 110110110111110111010 11110011111101111 1111001111010101101 1111011111011111 11111110101111010 11101111110011111 1101011101101111 |
Characters | 1,367 |
Words | 278 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 52 |
Words per line (avg) | 13 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 209 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 53 |
About this poem
Still wanting to believe...
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Written on 2021
Submitted by edilions on January 12, 2022
Modified on April 26, 2023
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