Analysis of Sun & the moon
Among the stars that have a different birth…
Climbing heaven and gazing on the earth…
I stand next to the stream of dawn and gaze at the sunrise,
Rayon of lights glowing through my eyes…
Cool breeze flowing through my body…
The same feeling I get when you are beside me…
Your simple presence enlightens my darkest atmosphere;
And with your touch, sends my soul into another stratosphere.
Like the sun and the moon, across the mountain and sea…
I start to glow when your bright smile shines upon me.
We’re so far apart when we aren’t touching lips…
And whenever we do…it’s like a solar eclipse.
Along the beach holding each others hands,
All night long we go marching, feet in the sand;
Reaching for the stars to catch a glimpse of the Milky Way…
Holding you dear, keeping you warm and safe…
Scheme | AABB CCDD CCEE XXXX |
---|---|
Poetic Form | Quatrain (75%) |
Metre | 01011101001 1010010101 1111011101101 101110111 11101110 011011111011 1101001011010 01111110101010 1010010101001 111111111011 011011110101 0010111101001 0101101101 11111101001 10101110110101 1011101101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 828 |
Words | 156 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 39 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 156 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
About this poem
Teenage dreamer living his youth years....
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Written on June 09, 2006
Submitted by edilions on January 12, 2022
Modified on April 26, 2023
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