Analysis of cowabunga pizza party



when you hear the buzzer
appreciate the art; like war;
the end was at the start
but we was somewhere
in the middle;
an answer
to an unsaid riddle;
little by little
we learned
the human experience
is a cord so brittle
that
whatever gets tied with it
is bound to break away; to be lost;
see - there's a difference
between the price
and the cost-

the relationship sank
so I'm walking the plank;
my ex marks a spot
where the daydreams of
Peg leg hops
Into the drop are buried;
they keep rolling
they won't stop;
as my brain
parrots my worst thoughts--
I guess every treasure needs a box.

every treasure needs a box?
broken window theory;
then every window needs a rock
put thirty seconds on the clock

never had a chance
in a three point stance
get your money
ok designer fancy pants
cops treat us like ants

black fist up
middle finger extended
noose around my neck
like a pendant
still on paper
like an indent
creative expression
no criminal intent
they hate
to see a brother content-- resplendent

in the lab:
I'm a homer
like Iliad,
treat reality
like a silly fad,
skating on em
like I'm really rad,
like a Billy bad-- ass
at a cowabunga pizza party
thinking like I'm Donatello;
can't even trust my mans
word to Othello--

my first words to god
will be hello
nice to meet you
I won't keep you
then I'm walking away
wondering why the fuck
does heaven needs gates--

6'6
never left no vegetables on the plate
always getting higher--
I need a cape.
I need some Bapes.
I need to escape;
mixtapes on replay
every day.
every day
is the day
I strive to be great.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111010 0100111 011101 1111 0010 110 110110 10110 11 0100100 101110 1 101111 111101111 110100 0101 001 00101 111001 11101 1011 111 0101110 1110 111 111 10111 1110010101 10010101 101010 110010101 11010101 10101 00111 1110 11010101 11111 111 1010010 10111 1010 1110 1101 010010 110001 11 1101010010 001 1010 1100 110 10101 1011 11101 101011 100101010 10111 110111 11010 11111 1101 1111 1111 111001 100101 11011 1 1011100101 11010 1101 1111 11101 1101 1001 1001 101 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,557
Words 320
Sentences 6
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 17, 11, 4, 5, 10, 12, 7, 11
Lines Amount 77
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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Written on December 21, 2021

Submitted by emnjomo on January 05, 2022

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Emmanuel Njomo

Emmanuel Njomo is an amateur poet, artist, and musician from the east coast-- heavily influenced by 90's era hip-hop and the cypher life, he focuses on off-beat rhyme schemes and insightful "punch lines" more…

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