Analysis of Earth Angel

Douglas H. Mc Clintock 1934 (Sarnia, Ontario)



I think I shall never see
A  daughter as caring as thee,
Your presence lights up my very room,
You always chase away my gloom.

Your ready smile for me to see,
Always a nice hello for me to hear,
It makes my heart so full of glee,
Why am I so blessed to have you so near ?

Its what inside of you that counts
A daughter's love completes my life.
You see me in all my despair
But you give me meaning to be alive !

Love makes the world a better place,
To have it shared is worth the price.
Its a kinship that  grows and grows,
its like I am living in a paradise !

Your treats and home cooked meals
Make me feel so good inside.
I am so blessed,  I need no refills.
You have made my life so satisfied.

Our talks about things in general
Make me feel so worthwhile.
I will always remember you as my little girl
Always a dad's best friend is just that !


Scheme AABB AXAX XXXX XCXC XDXD XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111101 01011011 110111101 1110111 11011111 101011111 11111111 1111111111 11011111 01010111 11101101 1111101101 11010101 11111101 1011101 1111100010 110111 1111101 111111101 11111110 1010110100 111111 111010111101 10111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 850
Words 194
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

Mary Helen, my daughter angel caregiver looking after her old ailing father. Using the refrain from Alfred Kilmer's poem - A Tree.

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Written on January 03, 2022

Submitted by Dougla$Irishman on January 03, 2022

Modified on April 13, 2023

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