Analysis of COLD



Some refer her to a ghost,
From the past back get her scores,
Other calls her cold,
A ruthless leaving no friends nor fore's.
She is blessed with looks,
Enough to sway one from thy feet,
Her eyes black but blazing fire behind the nooks,

Her temperament, with a posture a perfect fit.

But only she knows,
The tears behind those eyes has shed,
The ephialtes that in she drowns,
Each and every day, anger her only shade.
A fuel to keep her going,
Like crouches to keep her from falling,
Together like glue holding,
Herself, she has to do the scolding.

Those close to her knows better,
Than to judge from the actions,
No need to read from newsletter,
To get adequate exactions.

A heart lost in the meadows,
Afraid to receive any warmth,
For the past still lurks in the shadows,
Heartbreak still like a froth.

Oh love what have you done?
Such a pure soul turned to a zombie
Aren't you supposed to be an antidote?
Then why turn her life to a movie?


Scheme XAXABXB X CXXXDDDD EFEF CXCX XGXG
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 1011101 10101 010101111 11111 01111111 011110100101 010010100011 11011 01011111 011011 101001100101 01011010 11110110 0101110 011111010 1110110 1111010 1111110 11100010 011001 01101101 10111001 11101 111111 101111010 1010111110 111011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 954
Words 209
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 7, 1, 8, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

It was inspired by a soap opera (Killer bride) It made see in other light how sometimes we tend to stay away from the warmth because we are afraid that once we melt that ice in our heart, we will be fragile and get hurt again.

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Submitted by adlyne_f on December 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Adlyne Faith Agenga

Born and raised in Kenya, Africa and an emerging poet and writer of both fiction and non-fiction who loves to play with words and engraving them in the sweetest words. more…

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