Analysis of These Swollen Voices

Ben Sedgwick 2007 (United Kingdom)



These swollen voices hollow around me,
Pressure builds momentarily,
Every second every time every check every crime,
All I must deny; yet my look paints my hands red,
Lawfulness salutes as drones pass a glaire of disgust,
The sheep will follow every word with action to put one down,
It’s a tragedy; to I and to all,
Follow the leader discreetly before you all fall down too.

These swollen voices continue to flourish,
Dance monkey dance they yell; they want you guilty,
The flock calls culprit by siren,
 no verdict needed,
The courthouse is plastic; you’ve been sentenced three times,
Guilty upon enter,
Innocent upon verdict,
Guilty by masses.

These swollen voices select what you see,
The man with buckled shoes decided your fate; he owned the paper,
The followers expand,
Torches ignite and shine,
Sheep follow shepherds; in search of the blacksmith,
They need a monster to complete the tale,
That monster is you,
You must raise a white flag to a crooked myth,
Refusal is not an option,
Admit or get bit,
By these swollen voices.


Scheme AAXXXXXB XACXXDXE ADXXFXBFCXE
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010011 1010100 10010100110011001 111011111111 10111101101 0111010011101111 1010011011 100100100111111 11010010110 11011111110 01110110 11010 01110111011 100110 1000110 10110 1101001111 011101101111010 010001 100101 1101001101 1101010101 11011 11101110101 01011110 01111 111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,046
Words 211
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 11
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 274
Words per stanza (avg) 59

About this poem

I was targeted with lies, isolated from society for a month directly from the spawn of modern culture.

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Written on December 08, 2021

Submitted by sirben69430 on December 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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