Analysis of THE BEAUTY OF VISE VISA
THE BEAUTY OF VISE- VISA
As the sin which is the precious thing seen
It was green.
Before people have known
“It was shining”
Meanwhile, it was nine, to ten
The big bang if it will be “ten” to one hundred to a thousand mixed “n”
Bless for the woman and the man when Angels widely gladden
Granted from the God Of Heaven
This precious thing to be their own
It was done, as it was written.
Made our life to be glorified within
Everything good put in
Diamonds, pearls, gold garnet, mine.
Aquamarine, rubies, and surprise gemstone
White gold, purple diamonds, florin
Life is better than ever known
It was shine, it is still shine
It was vise – visa, never complain
It is the key to every paradise door as you go on.
It is the “key” from our Lord Of Heaven
It is no longer “sin” but “mine”
It is for you to gain.
From mine to my own
The Malaysia Gibbon
Given from the glittering bowl of amaranthine
Say “I am a man”
Dignified from the purified man
Longtime from the God of Armageddon
To be a supernatural gentleman
“And it was done, as it has been written”
My God thank you once again
Days have passed on,
we are no more in Malaysia or Gabon
We are, as we are, wherever we are, we are In
God is with us in this Beautiful World Garden.
The Garden Of Adam And Eve in the Eden.
From time to time has been done
“It is the vise – visa”, it has turned to be so golden.
God Of Galaxy And Universe from the period which has gone
Till now and then
“Bless us more joy and makes us more genuine.
All say, Amin.
By ALI K. ALI
01, DEC. 202I
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| Scheme | X A A B C D D E E B E F F G B F B G H I E G H B E A J J E E E D I I F E E E E X D E A X X X XC |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 0101110 1011101011 111 011011 1110 111111 011111111110101011 110100011101010 10101110 11011111 11111110 1101111001 10110 1011101 001100011 11101010 11101101 1111111 111101001 110111001011111 11011101110 11110111 111111 11111 001010 1010100111 11101 1010101 11011010 1100100100 0111111110 1111101 1111 11110010101 1111101011110 111101100110 010110010010 1111111 11011011111110 1110001010100111 1101 11110111100 1101 110110 11 1 11 11 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 1,719 |
| Words | 378 |
| Sentences | 17 |
| Stanzas | 47 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 48 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 26 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 7 |
About this poem
This is the poem that spiritually gives the reader or listener full awareness of nowadays life and good hope of his good future life. Explaining everything which God has created is important, even though in your eyes may be seen, such thing has no value. The poem tells you how things turn to be so useful from bad to the best (from the devil to David) the repentance to the good one, also shows you, the beauty is the beauty. Which you deserve as your right from God. The poem tells you where you think, you did wrong, and you can make it better. The elder says.” To miss the way is to know the way”. As the world is led the way of God, Spiritually, God wants everybody to succeed and enjoy the good life here and hereafter, there is no way; you will be otherwise, simply because God wants so. GOD IS GOD, That is all. The poem says “God is with us in this beautiful World Garden”, “The Garden of Adam and Eva in the Eden”. Everyone his origin is in Paradise. The paradise is led by love, we come from the same gender (Genealogy) of Paradise persons (Adam and Eve) started their life in Paradise, let us fully come back from our origin. In the life in Aden The poem says, “As the sin, which is the precious thing seen “, “It was green”. “Before people have known it was shine”, The time has gone “God bless us more joy and make us genuine, All say AMIIN more »
Written on January 12, 2021
Submitted by ALIFIRDAUS on December 01, 2021
Modified on March 20, 2023
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