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As the sin which is the precious thing seen

It was green.

Before people have known

“It was shining”

Meanwhile, it was nine, to ten

The big bang if it will be “ten” to one hundred to a thousand mixed “n”

Bless for the woman and the man when Angels widely gladden

Granted from the God Of Heaven

This precious thing to be their own

It was done, as it was written.

Made our life to be glorified within

Everything good put in

Diamonds, pearls, gold garnet, mine.

Aquamarine, rubies, and surprise gemstone

White gold, purple diamonds, florin

Life is better than ever known

It was shine, it is still shine

It was vise – visa, never complain

It is the key to every paradise door as you go on.

It is the “key” from our Lord Of Heaven

It is no longer “sin” but “mine”

It is for you to gain.

From mine to my own

The Malaysia Gibbon

Given from the glittering bowl of amaranthine

Say “I am a man”

Dignified from the purified man

Longtime from the God of Armageddon

To be a supernatural gentleman

“And it was done, as it has been written”

My God thank you once again

Days have passed on,

we are no more in Malaysia or Gabon

We are, as we are, wherever we are, we are In

God is with us in this Beautiful World Garden.

The Garden Of Adam And Eve in the Eden.

From time to time has been done

“It is the vise – visa”, it has turned to be so golden.

God Of Galaxy And Universe from the period which has gone

Till now and then

“Bless us more joy and makes us more genuine.

All say, Amin.


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About this poem

This is the poem that spiritually gives the reader or listener full awareness of nowadays life and good hope of his good future life. Explaining everything which God has created is important, even though in your eyes may be seen, such thing has no value. The poem tells you how things turn to be so useful from bad to the best (from the devil to David) the repentance to the good one, also shows you, the beauty is the beauty. Which you deserve as your right from God. The poem tells you where you think, you did wrong, and you can make it better. The elder says.” To miss the way is to know the way”. As the world is led the way of God, Spiritually, God wants everybody to succeed and enjoy the good life here and hereafter, there is no way; you will be otherwise, simply because God wants so. GOD IS GOD, That is all. The poem says “God is with us in this beautiful World Garden”, “The Garden of Adam and Eva in the Eden”. Everyone his origin is in Paradise. The paradise is led by love, we come from the same gender (Genealogy) of Paradise persons (Adam and Eve) started their life in Paradise, let us fully come back from our origin. In the life in Aden The poem says, “As the sin, which is the precious thing seen “, “It was green”. “Before people have known it was shine”, The time has gone “God bless us more joy and make us genuine, All say AMIIN 

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Written on January 12, 2021

Submitted by ALIFIRDAUS on December 01, 2021

Modified on March 20, 2023

1:53 min read

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Ali Kombo Ali was born in 1970 in the Southern District Of Zanzibar Tanzania, in the Village, called Muyuni. Awarded Leaving Certificate in Muyuni Secondary School in 1986 started O- level Education at Ben Bella Secondary School in Zanzibar 1997. Awarded Certificate of Secondary Education 1987, He studied A-Level Education 1994 in Lumumba Secondary School. Awarded Advanced Certificate Of Secondary Education 1996. In 1997-1999 joined the Institute of Finance Management (IFM) in Dar Es Salaam Tanzania for an Advanced Certificate Of Computer Science and acquired a good Statement of results which motivated him to continue with his study in the United States Of America 2000. In the U.S.A He was Awarded a Certificate Of Social Science in 2006. In Henry George School Of Social Science, New York. And continued to study in U S A and in 2008 Awarded Certificate Of Journalism. In Community News Production Institute In New York (CNPI) U S A. Ali has esprit de corps which led him to engage in literature work since when he was O -level for the purpose of helping the community as he can, enhancing his talent in different aspects, for example, when he was in the USA wrote a poetry book called HERE COMES THE CHAMPION in the form of an anthology. Other books which expects to publish soon are Kisa Cha Hadnaan written in the Swahili language and the short story book called Mr. Trash Man and the Magic Mirror, written in the English language. Ali lived in the USA from 2000 and came back home county Tanzania in 2010. So far lives in Tanzania. He is now in full preparation of taking a First Degree in Theology Of Islamic doctrine. more…


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