Analysis of I Lost
Ok. I lost.
Take my car keys.
Here is the password to my safe.
You want my warm bed?
A reason to live?
You want to sprinkle
this magic light all over
your frosted flakes?
You want the source
of my eternal joy,
the fire of my creative engine?
Or my heart on a bed of
leafy greens?
Ok. I got mixed up in the wrong jam.
I got my career stuck in
a busted sink. Wasted decades.
Never quite found enough love.
Never finished those novels.
Managed to flub every opportunity,
neglected to demonstrate sufficient gratitude
when the heavens rained
such bounty upon me.
Ok. Fine. I’m a screwup.
Never lived up to the hype
or found a way to bring the lightning
upon command,
messed up every relationship,
only knew how to love myself first,
was too blind to the pain of others,
too distracted by a billion foolish needs.
Ok, I was vain.
Ok, I was cowardly.
Ok, I didn’t have quite the right work ethic
and wasted years just thinking
it would all magically work out.
Ok, I rang the wrong buzzer
let racoons into my house
fell into a manhole
sang to the wrong sun.
Ok. Ok. It wasn’t good enough.
It wasn’t what you wanted.
But I’m here now goddamnit,
and I’m ready to turn this
big old bus around,
so sit back
and watch
as my crazy ass
makes up
for lost time.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 1111 1101111 11111 01011 11110 1101110 1101 1101 110101 0101101010 1111011 101 1111110011 1110110 01011001 1011011 1010110 10111000100 01011001010 10101 110011 111101 1011101 110111010 0101 11100010 10111111 111101110 10101010101 11111 1111100 11111101110 0101110 111100011 11110110 110111 10101 11011 111111101 111110 11111 0110111 11101 111 01 11101 11 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,270 |
Words | 277 |
Sentences | 29 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 10, 9, 8, 5, 4, 2, 8 |
Lines Amount | 49 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 120 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 30 |
About this poem
"I Lost" is from Matt Nagin's poetry collection "Notes From The Bonfire" available here: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B08NW8B1YD
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