Analysis of My greatest achievements!
Thoughts flowing into my mind!
Deeper the whole of this time!
Curved vexed by the lies!
Forsaken on and lied!
A gift indeed!
Her speech to me!
Their's nothing better than the truth!
Away, with life, mine needs it's booth! Directly in front of all my achievements was the horrible thought I did not mean it! With the sweat of my hands I wrote these pages to amend!
The hawk speaks to me!
The mongoose, and eagle beseech!
Before the time of rhymes and me being blind!
I was kind until one made me free my mind!
To dine is for me to eat alone!
Sharing my plate I'd rather not waste, I'm okay just to sometimes eat alone!
Unkind, fame is and fortune!
Wealthy and healthy!
Handsome, myself the hate still appalling!
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| Scheme | ABCDEFGHFIAAJJKFLC |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1100111 1001111 11101 010101 0101 0111 11010101 01111111010011110101010011111110111111110101 01111 01001001 01011101101 11101111111 111111101 101111011111101101 0111010 10010 101011010 1 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 746 |
| Words | 151 |
| Sentences | 20 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 18 |
| Lines Amount | 18 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 563 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 134 |
About this poem
A reflection of my life!
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Written on November 25, 2021
Submitted by devon_b on November 25, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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