Analysis of Continue on



Is it a piece of sod that broke the skies?
A botanical sprinkle on the substance of a dry desert ,
The enduring ocean went to a sweet water well to extinguish it’s thirst.
Indeed, even the mountain top twisted to kiss the mother earth.
Continue on, honing your stride ahead.
Level this backwoods and you’ll find the fortune you are looking for.
Continue on, ask this land and see.
This is the response for every one of your inquiries posing to where your triumph is.
This is your story and your base, venture out in it’s way now.
Yell out loud that this is workable for yourself and not to anybody.
Continue on, honing your stride ahead.
Level this backwoods and you’ll find the fortune you are looking for.
Continue on, ask this land and see.
This is the response for every one of your inquiries posing to where your triumph is
Is it a piece of sod that broke the skies?
A flower shower on the substance of a dry desert.
The enduring ocean went to a sweet water well to extinguish it’s thirst.
Indeed, even the mountain top adapted to kiss the mother earth.
The moving time consuming in aggravation has delivered you like a bolt of answer.
For the distress of mother earth’s consuming heart you are the aid of last assistance.
Mother earth has nobody to get some information about the tears in her eyes.
Make her re-bloom with crops once more.
Continue on, continue on with your furrow on the shoulder.
Request that the earth sprout up crops from its heart and continue on.
Continue on, holding the lance of light.
The messed up fruitless land will presently give you the grains to eat.
Wouldn’t this adjustment of you transform into a sensation?
Will not this story beginning as a raindrop transform into a flood?
With the unsettling influence that is an aftereffect of your power.
Your excursion begins as a triumph and transforms into a set of experiences.
In the wake of realizing your objective is their expectation and for them.
They’d yell out loud you’re their fate and deliverer.
Continue on, this is another life for your past.
This is the right profundity for your statures, open the primary entryway and continue on.
Continue on, you’re everybody’s story.
Your tutoring the future appropriately.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101111101 0010010101010110 0010101101101101011 0110010110110101 0101101101 1011101101011101 010111101 110011100111010010111101 111100111010111 1111111001010111000 0101101101 1011101101011101 010111101 110011100111010010111101 1101111101 01010101010110 0010101101101101011 01100101010110101 0101010001010101101110 100111010101110111010 101111110100101001 10111111 0101010111101010 0110111111100101 0101100111 0111011100110111 110101101010010 11110010101010101 1001001001111001110 10100110100010101101000 0011100101011010011 111111100100 0101110101111 110111111001010000101 01011110 110001001000
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,229
Words 390
Sentences 34
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,759
Words per stanza (avg) 391
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Written on August 09, 2019

Submitted by devadsr on November 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:57 min read
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