Analysis of I See You
I see the way you strive just to feel alive in your drive to live...
I see your struggle just to juggle every double, what more can you give?...
I feel you when you're tired, feeling uninspired, just doing what's required just to stay afloat...
I wanna ease your pain, so you can feel the rain and watch you in your gain, then listen to you gloat...
Success is in your mind and peace is what you find in your daily grind when someone sees you...
All I see is you, and all the work you do, just wanna be your boo and try to please you...
Just know I'm always there, and that I really care, your life I wanna share, just know I choose you.
| Scheme | ABCCDDD |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1101111110101111 1111011101001011111 111111010010110101011101 110111111101011011110111 011011011111011011111 1111101011111011101111 1111101110111110111111 |
| Characters | 631 |
| Words | 127 |
| Sentences | 7 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 7 |
| Lines Amount | 7 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 68 |
| Words per line (avg) | 18 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 478 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 127 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem for the man I love because I see him struggle through life trying to survive the adversities and obstacles that come his way as a hard working Black man.
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Written on October 19, 2021
Submitted by mamillerr22 on October 20, 2021
Modified on April 14, 2023
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