Analysis of Keep It Good

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Keep it good!

'Keep WHAT good?'

What you put under your hood.

People can not miss to wish back,
An opportunity almost to have.
But never had.
Although...
Made to believe,
As many are led astray...
To assume that which is wanted,
Satisfies a need to create...
A festival of gluttonous greed.
Feeding a lust of wasteful activities!

'And this you say,
Is good?
Or not good for my hood?'

Not if loyalty matters.
What happens when your engine stalls?
Some will call a mechanic.
Others?
Believing they will save a few dollars,
Will continue pumping garbage...
Into a tank overdue for a cleansing.
Then to hope...
Compliments continue to be given,
For an outside appearance.

However...
It's under the hood,
Many never understand but should...
Keep understood.
No matter if it gleams to sparkle,
And shine to blind...
From a recent wax job.
If it is not right under the hood?
What might look good on the outside...
That ride anticipated,
May be delayed with aches and pains.

'Oh...
At first I thought you were talking about,
What I should do...
To keep my mind and body,
Running in better condition.
You know?
By checking out what I eat.
With an exercising more.
And now I realize,
You were talking about folks...
Living in the 'hood'.
Doing things undercover.
And try to fake what they do.
Only to be riding around with others,
Causing them their aches and pains.
While charading around the neighborhood.
In a car just washed and waxed.
Out of the car wash!'

Yeah.
If it's good?
Why not?!
As long as people,
Are kept aware of what they pay for!
Why and for what reason.

'If anyone feeds on anything cheap?
And they know about it?
What do they expect?
Gold nuggets to eliminate?'

You're taking this somewhere,
I had not intended.

'Well...
Before opening the door,
I always ask if it's okay to enter.
Some people will just barge right on in.
Then act as if they are so surprised,
By what goes on to keep disbelieved...
What has been taken,
To go somewhere else.
They began with it to start,
In the first place.


Scheme A A A XXXBXCDEXX CAA FXXFFXXXGX HAAAIXXAXDJ BXKXGBXLXXAHKFJAXX XAXILG XXXE XD XLHXXAGXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 1111011 10111111 10100111 1101 1 1101 1101101 10111110 1001101 010011001 10011100100 0111 11 111111 1110010 11011101 1110010 10 0101110110 10101010 01011011010 111 1000101110 1111010 10 11001 10100111 101 110111110 0111 101011 111111001 11111011 110100 11011101 1 1111101001 1111 1111010 10010010 11 1101111 111001 01110 1010011 10001 101010 0111111 10111001110 1011101 1101010 0011101 11011 1 111 11 11110 110111111 101110 11011101 011011 11101 1101010 11011 111010 1 0110001 111111110 110111110 111111101 1111111 11110 1111 1011111 0011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,931
Words 367
Sentences 59
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 10, 3, 10, 11, 18, 6, 4, 2, 10
Lines Amount 77
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by Lp,jr. on October 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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