Analysis of Nails in the wall



So lately, I've been going crazy, trying to get you off my mind. Cause thoughts of you hang just like pictures, and gather dust over the time. Well we hung them up just like real lovers, and drove our nails into the wall. Cause we thought they'd be there forever, but we weren't permanent at all.


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Characters 296
Words 56
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 229
Words per line (avg) 56
Letters per stanza (avg) 229
Words per stanza (avg) 56

About this poem

Written during a sad time of my life

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Written on June 25, 2010

Submitted by debravastag on October 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Debra Vastag

Born in Philadelphia Pa 1969. Raised by Kathryn, a Philly native & William, born in Budapest Hungary. Writing has been my passion since before high school. more…

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