Analysis of Burning Souls

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Who threw dirt in the atmosphere?
You...
Turned peace evil.
And who came along to threat with fear?
You...
Turned peace evil.

Who messed up all relationships?
Just to have an attention to get.
And now that you have it you can't quit,
Doing more of your stupid 'stuff.
Making everybody to want to throw up.

You,
Need to go...
Where the heat burns a hole in your soul.

Yes you,
Need to go and disappear...
Until your cold butt turns to gold.
And found to feed the people needy,
Now!

Leave and take your evil with you now.
To burn.
Leave and take your evil with you now!


Scheme aBCaBC xxxxx Bxx baxxd DxD
Poetic Form
Metre 1110010 1 1110 011011111 1 1110 1111010 111101011 011111111 10111101 1010011111 1 111 101101011 11 111001 01111111 011101010 1 101110111 11 101110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 546
Words 109
Sentences 18
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 3, 5, 3
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by Lp,jr. on October 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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