Analysis of Him



His kiss. His kiss His kiss sets my body on fire.
Just one kiss from his lips and I'm struck with lust and desire.
His kiss so passionate and sweet, his lips gentle and tender.
I am submissive to him I let my body surrender.
He takes me.
Fills my body with his pleasuring sins.
I beg him to stop no I don't want this to end.
I beg him for more not really knowing what he has in stored.
I have taken lovers before but they all left me bored.
So yes, I give in.
While he pleasures my pain.
I start pleading insane.
Groaning and moaning while yelling his name.
I mean I have no control over this attraction, like a moth to a flame.
I mean I'm needing him like I need the blood in my veins.
I'm in too deep with this man with only me to blame.
And by the end of it all I'm relieved that I came.
Because his kiss ,his lips, and his pleasure touches my darkest, deepest, and wettest desire. That's why I'm here wanting no needing HIM in dire.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111111110110 111111011110010 111100011110010 110101111110010 111 11101111 111111111111 111111101011101 11101001111111 11110 111011 111001 1001011011 1111101101010101101 11110111101011 1011111110111 0101111101111 01111101101011010010010111110110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 934
Words 190
Sentences 21
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 714
Words per stanza (avg) 189

About this poem

This poem is about a woman/Mam finding the one person she/he cant live without.

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Written on July 07, 2020

Submitted by bernadettemiller22 on October 10, 2021

Modified by bernadettemiller22 on October 11, 2021

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