Analysis of I Just finished my drink



I just finished my drink
Walked out the door
A thousand times said
I can’t hear it anymore

Too many I’m sorries
Too many rough nights
It was too many lefts
It was too many rights

I feel battered and torn
On the inside and out
It was that kind of love
My tired soul can do without

How can I go on
With all of this shame
All of them telling me
I wasn’t to blame

It’s hard to go on
With nothing in hand
I’ll keep my head up
I’ll dare make a stand


Scheme XAXA BBBB XCXC DEXE DFXF
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111011 1101 01011 111101 11011 11011 111101 111101 111001 100101 111111 11011101 11111 11111 111101 1111 11111 11001 11111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 443
Words 96
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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Written on September 12, 2021

Submitted by menziest on October 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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