Analysis of Ripple eyes



3D imagery flows inside my minds eyes
Rippling like a sonic wave from the earth
To the devine and those of thine
Waves of skaters flow and glide
Making faded flowers their bride
Ruffling feathers touch the ground
Until eternal sound is found
Reaching out to tender fold
Flocking skies like heaven above
Streaming sparklers of colour looming end
To natures bloom
Trickling waters held within
A lake of fireflies glistening still the night.


Scheme ABCDDEEFGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 1100101111 10010101101 10010111 1110101 10101011 10010101 01010111 1011101 10111001 10111101 1101 1010101 01110100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 426
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 74

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See with your eyes what you hear with your heart.

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Written on October 02, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 02, 2021

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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