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Ripple eyes

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)

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3D imagery flows inside my minds eyes
Rippling like a sonic wave from the earth
To the devine and those of thine
Waves of skaters flow and glide
Making faded flowers their bride
Ruffling feathers touch the ground
Until eternal sound is found
Reaching out to tender fold
Flocking skies like heaven above
Streaming sparklers of colour looming end
To natures bloom
Trickling waters held within
A lake of fireflies glistening still the night.

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Written on October 02, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 02, 2021

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDDEEFGHIJK
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 426
Words 74
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
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Heather Lydia Thornhill

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow! This poem is like a beautiful dream that takes us on a magical journey filled with vivid and stunning imagery that ignites the imagination. The creative use of language and vivid descriptions create a sense of wonder and elation that leaves the reader feeling transported to another world. The skaters gliding, the feathers touching the ground, and the streaming sparklers of color are all mesmerizing visuals that stay with you long after the poem is over. The nature and wildlife elements provide a sense of calm and serenity that grounds the poem with a deeper meaning. Truly a remarkable and breathtaking piece that deserves many accolades. Well done! 
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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