Analysis of Oh you Pretty Things.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



My child you run like a herd in spring
Your legs spinning; your trainers bling
You last as long as a marathon runner
Or slow, taking time in case you blunder
Coins toss up as to who mans the bars
Outside cigarettes adorn the jars
Your bodies young; strong like stars
They climb and pull, manning the ropes
Your muscles row, as your legs grow.


Scheme AABBCCCDE
Poetic Form Nonet (22%)
Metre 111110101 11101101 1111101010 1110101110 111111101 11010101 1101111 11011001 11011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 334
Words 65
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 272
Words per stanza (avg) 65

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Written on September 30, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on September 30, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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