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I feel so hot right now.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)

Rhymed
Don't eat the toy
it's too small for you
Dont drink the wine
its not good for you
Don't hear their words
it'll deafen you
Don't see in the dark
it might frighten you
Don't say you'll die
it breaks my heart in two
Don't smell the fumes
it may consume you
Don't hold the spider
it has a bite too

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Compassion.

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Written on October 27, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDBEBFBGBHB
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 280
Words 61
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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Heather Lydia Thornhill

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