Analysis of Broken Wall

Nubia 1987 (Miami)



Bricks and concrete stacked up high unbreakable and structured so tight.                                                Build up tension from old scars and wounds but as I lay my character defects on the cross I’ve become renewed.                                                           Piece by piece and day by day crumbles of my wall seem to fade because of you I have new  memories made.                                                            Beams of light shining through the cracks bricks and concrete lay on these side tracks.                      Not as high but not so low that’s all right I’ll take it slow.                                                                                 Grace and glory fill these spaces not looking back ready for the changes.                                                    Now I have a broken wall, I jump to you, you catch my fall


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Characters 894
Words 110
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 451
Words per line (avg) 427
Letters per stanza (avg) 451
Words per stanza (avg) 427

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Letting Jesus in and breaking my internal wall

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Written on September 20, 2021

Submitted by NubS on September 22, 2021

Modified by NubS on January 09, 2022

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