Analysis of If I flew through space would you see me?
My beloved,
I wonder if you ever think of me
in our times of solitude. In those moments
of the night when you wake up, Do you find me there as comfort?
I write as someone who has never been in love
yet knows everything about it. I want to share my concerns with you.
I want you to know that if anything ever happens
I will be ready for your call.
My beloved
I write as someone who is anyone but myself
though we share the same qualities. Would you love them
the way I love you? If I was a shooting star drifting
through space would you spend your precious time to recognize me? For if I was helpless and misunderstood
would you spend the day trying to solve the mystery of me like a Rubik's cube?
I ask all these questions as someone who royally ruined us.
Yet still wants everything
to do with you.
| Scheme | Axxxxbxx Axxcxxxcb |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 101 1101110111 01011100110 101111111111110 11111110101 1110011111110111 1111111101010 11110111 101 1111111011 111011001111 01111111010110 11111110111011111100001 11101101101001110101 111110111100101 11110 1111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 783 |
| Words | 158 |
| Sentences | 11 |
| Stanzas | 2 |
| Stanza Lengths | 8, 9 |
| Lines Amount | 17 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
| Words per line (avg) | 9 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 314 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 79 |
About this poem
This was the first poem I ever wrote and still have a lot of sentimental value to it. It's a lover questioning his ex lover.
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Written on March 12, 2019
Submitted by SelcouthEgo on September 21, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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