Analysis of The Formed Eye



The fog is in the fir trees,
Now dragging its slimy belly
On the bank.
Even the dirt keeps breathing
A small death.
Taken from the ocean,
The river turns upon itself.
In the dark time, an eye
Begins to form.

Let us go then, you and I,
The Cambridge Ladies who live in
Furnished souls,
Who never dreamed of incarnate
Gaps in time and space,
But of a world of knights
And wizards and Love.
Let us go then to imaginary gardens
With real toads in them.
But the flowering lily pads
Are moody, lapping their glossy sides
As if trying to hide
The slightest flaw, but
Failing completely.
And the warm eye in the sky
Is gone
And there is no light.
I knew not that you
Had covered my eyes, as
You led me down a path
Of twists and turns; a
Descent follows, endless and
Destructible.

One must have a mind of winter,
Biting clear and cold,
Who sees, who steps, who calls in a
Blessed rage for order.
When sisters separate, they haunt
Each other: you know in
Singing,
Not to sing.


Scheme XAXBXXXCX CDXEXXXXXXXXEACXXXXXFXA GXFGXDBB
Poetic Form Etheree  (38%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 0110011 11011010 101 1001110 011 101010 01010101 001111 0111 1111101 01010110 101 11011010 10101 110111 01001 11111010010 11101 10100101 110101101 111011 01011 10010 0011001 11 01111 11111 110111 111101 11010 0110100 1 11101110 10101 11111100 11110 1101011 110110 10 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 929
Words 187
Sentences 11
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 23, 8
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 250
Words per stanza (avg) 62

About this poem

Published in Through the Eyes of Women: an International Collage, Chemeketa Press 1992

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Written on November 10, 1986

Submitted by Ariel on September 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ariel

Ariel is a full-time Pacific Northwest poet, often participating at Oregon Open Mics events. She has been published in Gold Man Review, AIM, The Widow’s Handbook, and most recently in Terra Incognita, On The Platform Waiting and Free From Monsters. Ariel often collaborates in many Willamette Valley poetry/art projects and is a member of Oregon Poetry Association, Mid-Valley Poets Association, Willamette Writers and Poet. Her website is poetariel.net. more…

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