Analysis of Last breath



Last breath
First step into the void
As shadows and light
Become one in the night
As stars cover the sky
And the immense Of space
Frees each day
And children are born
To this world
As they grow in numbers
And revolve like the sun
In a heat and bursts
Of light upon this world
And worlds orbit
The conscious mind
As thoughts become divine
And we send a word
Which disturbs a world
As we rise
And it falls
To a last breath
And a first step
As a void is filled


Scheme ABCCDEFGHIJKHLMNOHPQARS
Poetic Form
Metre 11 110101 1101 011001 111001 000111 111 01011 111 111010 001101 00101 110111 0110 0101 110101 01101 10101 111 011 1011 0011 10111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 435
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 94
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Written on July 25, 2021

Submitted by Markcloutier on September 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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