Analysis of not violence



Only love can keep you away from pain,
Otherwise you will seek blessings from pouring rain.
Why do you persist with a long monolog?
You must seek peace from meaningful dialog.

If your life's full of mystery,
All about you will be pure misery.
Victims' blood has surely uttered malediction
Upon you, which is everybody's prediction.

With whom have you signed this pact?
You kill a man, woman, and cat.
So the carnage has caused people great sorrow,
And your relations will probably be narrow.

We know that your warm embrace is a masquerade
Because you have betrayed some comrade.
Obey the call of good sense,
Obey the call of goodness!

Why have you lost your reason?
Your acts sound like a real treason.
Only love can keep you away from pain,
Otherwise you will seek blessings from pouring rain.


Scheme AAbb ccad xxee xxxx ddAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1011110111 10111101101 111011011 11111100100 11111100 1011111100 101110101 01111100010 1111111 11011001 10101110110 010101100110 11111011001 01110111 0101111 0101110 1111110 11110110 1011110111 10111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 776
Words 140
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 28

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Write against those who use violence for their claim

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Written on 2002

Submitted by jacqmain2002 on September 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jacques NZUZI LUZAYISU

Jacques NZUZI LUZAYISU, alias “Jacqmain Deca”, born in Kinshasa (DR Congo), april 4th, 1964. Computer scientist, and amateur poet, membership of literary movement “Les révoltés de la plume” in Kinshasa Democratic Republic of the Congo. Married, three children (two daughters and one son). Some of his poems are selected in 2002 to be published in American anthology and selected to participate in one conference about poetry in USA. : “Firemen, great heroes, Terrorist, and Black Widow”, with poetry.com Other poems: son of mine, rose and love, the agony, the epitaph, a sleepy town, an accomplished destiny, posted on voicesnet.com since 2007 : https://www.voicesnet.com/memberDocuments/186443 He wishes to be a great poet; published around the world with a beautifully illustrated poetry book. His poems are very sad and melancholic, that’s: “giving hope in hopeless situation”. more…

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