Analysis of God's Masterpiece



The velvet red rose bows as you pass by
It’s pedals wither as it concedes in envy
Your soft rouge lips in shame it cries.

Your Persian eyes hold amber flame
No man resists the warmth inside
No souls remain the same.

Soft long hair shimmers with golden strands
Invites the summer breeze to dance
A whirlwind rages within itself
To blow through the locks it finds romance.

Skin of porcelain no blemish, no scars
Gods masterpiece Gods Sun
Gods heaven Gods Star.
As angels sigh and lay at your feet  
For you are the one
God lays down his brush
His masterpiece done.


Scheme XXX AXA XBXB XCXXCXC
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111111 110101101010 11110111 11011101 11010101 110101 111101101 01010111 01100101 111011101 1110011011 11011 11011 110101111 11101 11111 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 557
Words 104
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 7
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

I wrote this for a girl I had a crush on...lol..she did not know I wrote it for her.

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Written on January 01, 2017

Submitted by W.K.Clyde on September 06, 2021

Modified on April 06, 2023

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