Analysis of My Love Affair With Dell



I am  sitting at my Dell
I skipped lunch but what he hell
My friends are here
in the stratosphere
Where FB keeps me happy and well


Scheme AABCA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Lanturne  (40%)
Metre 1110111 1111111 1111 0010 11111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 126
Words 27
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 28

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Written on August 26, 2021

Submitted by davidg.20663 on August 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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David Granteer

The website shows me as "davidg20663". This is the identity I was assigned when I joined. The stuff (including poems) under this identity was submitted before I joined the website. I was born in Montana and grew up in Portland, OR. I went to a technical high school, Benson, and worked on the radio station there, KBPS. I was in the Navy Reserves and spent my active duty in Washington, DC I have a BS in physics and an MSEE I am a life Senior Member of the Institute of Electrical and Electronic Engineers I was granted two patents I have been married nine times The name of my present wife is Carol We have a combined family of six children I list my religion as Zen Buddhism more…

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