Analysis of WHEN OWN BROKE ME !

Anushka Singh 2007 (Ranchi, Jharkhand)



Hey ! here i’m
Emberld ! precious
So pure ! i’m
Really !Auspicious !

Oh ! broker!
You! gotta stuck in
my web of hanker
yeah ! you come in

are you real ?
i don’t believe
i’ll be rich ample
if you ! i receive !

let me test you
you are gem ball!
Uttered  seller ,n threw
yahooo ! hadda groundfall!

Oh !  it’s maid  turn now !
Greed ! she’s approach in
Intimate ! I’ll be safe ! oh ! wow !
Hmm..!! What’s  forth come - in ?

Amazing ! I can’t believe !
Its diamond !
Alike vendor! she deed
Oh !  me rhinestone , now weep !

Is there anyone ?
My esse ! who  could  see
Ya ! i’m  in tonne !
Need nanny n i’ll glee !

Oh !yes!  its jeweller
He would know
Who ‘m i better
Hope ! he don’t throw !

He  too ! ufh !
Deed the same
I’m broken ,haah !
Why’d i expect via them !

My structural bond !
Is enough deep n strong
To  endure extreme n beyond
But  ! jeweller  you deed wrong !

Underestimate ! whoever
Will do , i don’t regret
Jeweller ! you know me better
 You’d threw , ‘m broken n upset !


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFXF GXGE HDHD FXXX IJIJ CKCK FXXX LMLM CNCN
Poetic Form Quatrain  (82%)
Metre 111 110 111 10010 110 11010 11110 1110 111 1101 11110 11101 1111 1111 101011 111 11111 11010 10011111 10110 0101101 110 011011 11111 1110 11111 1101 110111 1111 111 11110 1111 111 101 1101 1101101 11001 101111 10101101 11111 1010010 111101 111110 11110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 993
Words 171
Sentences 49
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

it is the poem displaying that how it feels when someone close to us don't and understand us , it never feel a lot when society degrade us but it actually hurts when your beloved don't even try to heed and know you ...

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Written on August 21, 2021

Submitted by 8519anushka on August 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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