WHEN OWN BROKE ME !

Anushka Singh 2007 (Ranchi, Jharkhand)



Hey ! here i’m
Emberld ! precious
So pure ! i’m
Really !Auspicious !

Oh ! broker!
You! gotta stuck in
my web of hanker
yeah ! you come in

are you real ?
i don’t believe
i’ll be rich ample
if you ! i receive !

let me test you
you are gem ball!
Uttered  seller ,n threw
yahooo ! hadda groundfall!

Oh !  it’s maid  turn now !
Greed ! she’s approach in
Intimate ! I’ll be safe ! oh ! wow !
Hmm..!! What’s  forth come - in ?

Amazing ! I can’t believe !
Its diamond !
Alike vendor! she deed
Oh !  me rhinestone , now weep !

Is there anyone ?
My esse ! who  could  see
Ya ! i’m  in tonne !
Need nanny n i’ll glee !

Oh !yes!  its jeweller
He would know
Who ‘m i better
Hope ! he don’t throw !

He  too ! ufh !
Deed the same
I’m broken ,haah !
Why’d i expect via them !

My structural bond !
Is enough deep n strong
To  endure extreme n beyond
But  ! jeweller  you deed wrong !

Underestimate ! whoever
Will do , i don’t regret
Jeweller ! you know me better
 You’d threw , ‘m broken n upset !

About this poem

it is the poem displaying that how it feels when someone close to us don't and understand us , it never feel a lot when society degrade us but it actually hurts when your beloved don't even try to heed and know you ...

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on August 21, 2021

Submitted by 8519anushka on August 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

51 sec read
3

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD EFXF GXGE HDHD FXXX IJIJ CKCK FXXX LMLM CNCN
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 993
Words 171
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Anushka Singh

A highschool student planning to execute some needful changes required in society and chosen writing to promote and express her thoughts creatively.. more…

All Anushka Singh poems | Anushka Singh Books

0 fans

Discuss the poem WHEN OWN BROKE ME ! with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "WHEN OWN BROKE ME !" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 Mar. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/107539/when-own-broke-me-!>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    March 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    15
    hours
    23
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The use of words and phrases to create mental images and evoke sensory experiences is called _______.
    A metaphor
    B symbolism
    C imagery
    D personification