Analysis of Dreams Caress



I close my  eyes, I see your face.
Once again to drift, into "Our Place"
I see your smile, imagine your touch
So soft and gentle, love you so much.
Can’t picture my life, without seeing you there,
So many memories, we so often share.
You are in my  thoughts, throughout the day,
In my soul, in my heart, you always will stay.
Reading the words we have said,
Going through it all in my head.
Hoping everything will be alright,
Praying to God, and holding on tight.
Hoping for things, I dream to be real,
Happy and  loved,  thats what I want to feel!
Will you hold me, want me, just for a start.
All I need, is a small place in your heart.

Dancing around in a place of our own,
Always together, never alone.
Holding each other, never letting go,
This place we've created, our heaven you know.
Dreams take me to you, what bliss, as I sleep,
Then, I awaken, this too I can't keep.
Ripped from my arms, your face fades away,
Wishing deep in my heart, here you would stay.
Loneliness caresses my fading skin,
Trying to escape this hell that I'm in.
Cold, alone, not knowing what I have done,
Take us back in time, and into the sun.
Where I can be with you, forever, in love
Into the stars and way up above.
Thoughts come  flooding, into my mind,
How could this happen, me be so blind.
Losing perspective, of things that can't be,
Me loving you... not you loving me.
Wishing and wanting, cannot make you feel,
It's only in dreams, it will never be real.


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH IIJJKKDDLLMMNNOOPPGG
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1011101101 111101011 110101111 11011011011 11010011101 110110101 0110111111 1001111 10111011 1010111 101101011 101111111 1001111111 1111111101 1111011011 10010011101 10101001 1011010101 111010101011 1111111111 1101011111 111111101 1010111111 1000101101 1010111110 1011101111 1110100101 11111101001 010101101 11100111 111101111 1001011111 110111101 1001010111 11001111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,425
Words 277
Sentences 20
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 20
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 548
Words per stanza (avg) 141
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Submitted by Sunni1313 on August 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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