Analysis of The Flower Lady

Douglas H. Mc Clintock 1934 (Sarnia, Ontario)



I once knew a lady named Marjorie
At age ninety, she was very tiny,
But planting flowers was her glory,
Everything she did was very tidy.

She was so neat and trim,
And a wide grin to boot.
Everything was planned and not just a whim,
She had no critics and didn't care a hoot !

At ninety  pounds she weighed soaking wet,
She had a poodle dog named Maggie
And a wide brim hat, never to sweat,
Everything in place, it was never shabby !

But she was also called the Zinnia Lady,
A well known annual flower.
Her expertise brought her fame and many allocates,
The colors in the zinnias got louder and louder..

But she had a soft spot for other things too
Like tomatoes, cucumbers and potatoes.
We all shared in her bounty she grew,
Fresh things on our plate with many thanks.

Why do some people come into your life ?
We can all learn from each other.
She had a knack with flowers, she was so wise,
Her favorite expression was "oh brother."

But some good things do end
Alas, she moved out west to be with family,
She was a real character, a one of a kind friend,
To know her was so great  because of her humanity  !


Scheme AAAA BCBC DADA AEXE FXFX XEXE GAGA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (86%)
Metre 1110101100 1110111010 110101010 101111010 111101 001111 101101101 11110010101 110111101 110101110 001111011 1001111010 111101010010 01110010 00110101010 01000100110010 11101111011 10101000010 111001011 1111011101 1111010111 11111110 11011101111 01000101110 111111 011111111100 1101100011011 11011101100100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,092
Words 214
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 31

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Written on August 11, 2021

Submitted by Mcclintock on August 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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