Analysis of Consigned to oblivion...



Cruising through piercing winds
Drifting country miles from you,
Humming to dead heartbeats
Imbibing pitchers of beer too soon.

Liquid courage blurs the streets
At 90 sticks don't shift so smooth,
Empty tanks steer shimmering lights
Vibing to vibrant sunset hues.

Beacon of hope awaits my stroll
On balmy dusk and moonlit lawns,
Basking on shores with remedy blunts
Vistas of colour drench my orbs.

From spirit-shattering to soul-searching
Nimble mind succours our role,
Selfish traits and selfless ways
Appease us not nor changes course.

- Furkhan Noordeen


Scheme AXBC BXXX DXXA XDXX C
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 1010111 10111 1101111 1010101 111111 10111001 111011 10110111 1101011 101111001 1011111 1101001110 1011101 1010101 01111101 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 553
Words 88
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Written on August 03, 2021

Submitted by furkhannoordeen119 on August 03, 2021

Modified on May 04, 2023

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