Analysis of Monalisa



All your peers have turned back to dust,
everyone you knew breathed their last
but you still sit there,
wearing he same dress Da Vinci gave you.
Are you not tired of being alone?

You're still young and beautiful'
when all you boyfriend's faces  wrinkled ages ago,
they all kissed you goodbye coz they had to go,
but i'm still here, my heart had been melting for you.

Stand up hold my hand and lets move out of Paris
i'll show you a small world of happiness
where the moon and stars kiss at night,
where all clouds carry drops of love.

I'll be like Leonardo,
to paint you a smile that never feds,
to paint you a heart whose love never ends
to paint to innocent eyes whose tears never sheds


Scheme XXXAX XBBA XXXX BCXC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1011111 11111 1011111011 1111011001 1110100 111110101001 1111111111 111111111011 111110111110 1110111100 10101111 11110111 111010 111011101 1110111101 111100111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 672
Words 132
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

it's a love poem written for leonado's Monalisa painting assuming she is a lovable lady waiting to be loved.

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Written on July 28, 2021

Submitted by ashlynbrena on July 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ashlyn Brena

Ashlyn Brena is a Zimbabwean writer born on the 24th of June 2001. He is a writer of poetry, short stories,songs, short and feature films. He is rooted in the theme of love. He is the C.E.O and Founder of Pies_negros. more…

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