Analysis of Our song



Timeless,
Beautiful moments
So unexpected
Came by surprise.
My heart’s
Suddenly broken
So unprotected
Silently cries.

My lord,
Open the meaning,
Lighten my dark way
Onto the stars.
I was
Scared I’m dreaming,
Biting my sore lips,
Hoping it lasts.

Endless
Ocean around me,
Wind in my hair,
Salt on my skin.
My heart’s
Missing one more beat.
Will you be there
Waiting for me.


Scheme axbcDxbc xexxxexx afgxDxgf
Poetic Form
Metre 10 10010 1010 1101 11 10010 1010 1001 11 10010 10111 1001 11 1110 10111 1011 10 10011 1011 1111 11 10111 1111 1011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 361
Words 65
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by hb on July 14, 2021

Modified by hb on July 14, 2021

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