In love with your sole



What happened to me? How it happed? And why?
I used to be happy with my little life...
Or was I? The answer is now unclear.
Your voice is my air, I live when I hear.

Your voice makes me drown. My chest lacks the air.
I’m scared - I’m happy - I’m sad... I just stare...
Your picture, your eyes - my skins hurts like on fire
I’m fighting away this unknown desire...

I thought tales lie. Never trusted these stories
I thought love is smooth, like these tasteless sweet lollies.
My biggest mistake, twist of fate, revelation
In love with your sole. I can’t solve this equation.
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Submitted by hb on July 10, 2021

Modified by hb on July 10, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX AABB CCDD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 572
Words 109
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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  • Soulwriter
    Love the way you write!
    LikeReply2 years ago
    • hb
      Thank you! Glad you like it!
      LikeReply2 years ago

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